English Composition › Section I · Rhetorical analysis › Topic I.3

Editing focus: mixed sentence constructions

Some sentences start down one grammatical road and finish on another. Learning to spot these mixed constructions, and to rebuild them, keeps a sharp analysis from being blurred by sentences that do not hold together.

In this topic

  • When a sentence changes direction
  • A phrase posing as a subject
  • Doubled subjects and shifting people
  • Faulty predication
  • Is when, is where and the reason is because
  • Just because... doesn't mean
  • A three-step repair method
  • Worked example: four repairs
  • Watch for these in analysis
  • Worked example: editing a paragraph
  • Common mistakes to avoid
  • Key takeaways

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